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When we talk about challenges, my first thought is my high school life. I worked hard to get where I am now. High school was not easy for me as an ESL student. I progressed through ESL with the help of my teachers. When we face challenges in school it seems difficult at the time, and once we succeed, we realise that these challenges will keep happening in our lives, and the will to succeed is in our blood.